Sunday, 30 October 2011

Bárbara's anecdote! *0*

Some months ago, my friends and I were going back to home and we caught the underground. At 8'00PM more or less, when we were between two stops, a teenage boy took a gun from his pocket and he began to shout to the people. ‘Stop everybody!’ he said. And all of us hide under the sits. People were scared, but in Godella’s stop, that boy got off and I saw I had been hugged to one friend very strongly. What a terrible experience!

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1 comment:

Patricia Bou said...

back to home (PREP)
took OUT a gun
shout AT (prep)
hide (VT)
sits - check
hugging a friend


Please revise use of prepositions!!
:)