Monday, 24 October 2011

Personal anecdote



Once, when I was visiting Paris with my friends, a curious thing happend.
All my friends and I were visiting the most important monuments in Paris and we were queued in the Eiffel Tower.. Suddenly, about us a chinese tourist began to dance. Everybody laughted at her and the poor chinese didn't realize. Moreover, I imitated her and my friends couldn't stop laughing.


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1 comment:

Patricia Bou said...

queued (VT - ing)
about us (end of sentence, change prep)
laughted (sp)
chinese > Chinase woman /dancer
realize it
moreover is too formal here, and does not make sense either!

:)