PERSONAL ANECDOTE by Santiago
When I was in a party, I had a deeply pain in my stomache. I went outside, because the party was in a house and I felt better. So I decide to come back at home. In the door, I tried to take my keys...they aren´t in my pocket. So came back at the party and walk around the floor that I stept. Nothing. I tried to sleep in the door waiting some neighbor to open me the door when he would go to work. I don´t know why I did it, but I went to take my mail in the mailbox. What lucky I am that the keys were in the bottom! I learnt to see my pocket when I leave home.
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i have some errors: feelt tried.... sorry.
deely (use adjective, not adverb)
stomache (sp)
So I DECIDED (VT) to go back home (no prep)
at the door
take --get
aren't (VT)
So came back (subject)
walk (VT)
floor where I had been
waiting FOR
to open the door for me
get my mail from the box
how lucky I was! ...
before leaving
Santiago: remember to revise your homework more carefully
:)
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